THIS IS MY FIRST BLOG ..............A POEM ON A REALISTIC ISSUE......."TRAILLING TERROR"
An uncanny fervour gripped all around ,
When a horrendous sound thundered down.
No!No war has been avowed:
Yet the riffle's noise was very loud.
A new born cherub,
Unknown of her malicious fate;
Continued to giggle playing with her mother's plait.
The lullablysuddenly sunk into silence;
knowing they will be soon in the cage of a tyrant.
NO one was safe even behind a shut door;
Brutally to peices,one n all they tore.
The deafening din refused to wane;
Continued the show of terror,in every narrow lane.
The innocent smiling,in the lap of nature;
Suddenly found themselves in the land of torture.
Amidst the noise of guns,
The criesof the people drowned;
In this "piece of peace",
Once again terror was crowned.
A cloud of melancholy shrouded one and all;
Although the gruesome acts of the brutes did fall.
The creeping silence then stung the dreadful day;
And left all horror stuck,with sanity at bay.
A few of those who were alive wanted to die;
cause their wounded souls could be healed,
was a big lie.........................................
An uncanny fervour gripped all around ,
When a horrendous sound thundered down.
No!No war has been avowed:
Yet the riffle's noise was very loud.
A new born cherub,
Unknown of her malicious fate;
Continued to giggle playing with her mother's plait.
The lullablysuddenly sunk into silence;
knowing they will be soon in the cage of a tyrant.
NO one was safe even behind a shut door;
Brutally to peices,one n all they tore.
The deafening din refused to wane;
Continued the show of terror,in every narrow lane.
The innocent smiling,in the lap of nature;
Suddenly found themselves in the land of torture.
Amidst the noise of guns,
The criesof the people drowned;
In this "piece of peace",
Once again terror was crowned.
A cloud of melancholy shrouded one and all;
Although the gruesome acts of the brutes did fall.
The creeping silence then stung the dreadful day;
And left all horror stuck,with sanity at bay.
A few of those who were alive wanted to die;
cause their wounded souls could be healed,
was a big lie.........................................
so many heavy words !!
ReplyDeletethis was a very good line
In this "piece of peace",
Once again terror was crowned.
superb, u exactly described today's scenario. I just loved the last two lines.. "A few of those who were alive wanted to die;
ReplyDeletecause their wounded souls could be healed,
was a big lie.."
a rich description of whatever you wanted to express..its worth praising..keep the good work going...
ReplyDeletethis 1 is simply superb............
ReplyDeletepeice of peace line is superb.........
g8 going...........
carry on
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ReplyDeletehmm , Hey waw apurva mi jus tuzi philosophy wachli , mast watli yar but mala jasti writings nahi disat aahet tuze , ajun ka bar nahi lihit tu.... {Dipie}
ReplyDeletebe simple na.. feelin lyk u wrote it for d sake of writin in ur blog... neways good effort but if u go by wrd 2 wrd meanin of the "blah blah" words it sounds like nethng..
ReplyDeleteyour blog and ur thoughts about impact of terrerism of 26/11 on India are nice....but m sugestion is that you should write in simple language to understand it.So a lot can read in less period of time.
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